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For a group I recently joined focused on improvement. ^^ The original art is by , right here!:  who asked for some help with anatomy.

I'm by no means amazing at anatomy, but I figured I could give it a try with a few things that I know about. here are some pointers I picked up on :3

1) You have a good eye for composition, it flows nicely, catches the eye, and fills the page well
2) your torso and leg anatomy isn't as off as you might think it is, there were only minor errors imo ^^
3) Focus on the ratio of shoulder to head size, as well as arm length. Arms should reach to about the middle of the thigh when fully extended/laying flat against your body, and the upper and lower arm should be roughly the same length.
4) As far as head size I'd make it slightly smaller, but that's personal preference. Depending on your level of stylization/leaning towards a manga style, that size head is ok for his body size(just try to center it a little more on his shoulders)